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BY: Anakin51550

*AN ADVERISEMENT: SOME PARTS ARE INTENSE, PLS I DON'T WANT BAD COMMENTS... AND READ THE FULL STORY... THANK YOU :D*

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The rain washed the planet after a thousand years of an everlasting drought. I was the newest member of the squadron.
Around me were the best clone commandos and the first prototype.

The Jedi sent us to clean out a Geonosian factory. I was excited, but it was darker there and I was afraid.

My body was shaking from the tremendous amount of fear, but one of the men touched my shoulder and whispered, "Everything okay? Don't be afraid. We're together and I'll protect you."
That gave me an immense amount of inspiration, prompting me to continue.

Ahead of us was a gigantic door. "All clear!" one called out. "Throw a grenade!"

I went in first after the explosion and saw an extreme amount of Geonosian bugs. They were very, very angry and began to assault us. I began blasting like a maniac, hitting everything in my path, but it wasn't good enough.

I thought I was alone, but then I remembered my brothers. They were blasting in a similar fashion.

All of a sudden, the Geonosians began devouring them. It was such a horrible sight. It was a nightmare. They ate my brothers! I had no idea what I was supposed to do. Would I stay here and be eaten or put up a fight?

I decided to stay and fight. After making my decision, I realized that it was the wrong choice.

I glanced around me to see that I was the last one standing. I began to run as fast as my legs could carry me. As I ran, the lights on my helmet started to fail. Darkness overwhelmed me and blinded me. I reached into a compartment in my belt and pulled out a miniature lantern, walking cautiously through the factory.

I continued to search for the exit, but a noise gathered up my attention. I crept around a corner and witnessed the bugs using my brothers. They were putting them in their eggs! It was the most disgusting thing I'd ever seen. I couldn't believe my eyes and I felt sick to my stomach.

I knew that I had to do something, but what was I supposed to do? I didn't know what would help at this moment. I could only sit here and watch in horror as my brothers suffered.

I held my head in my hand and sighed. I whispered, "Stupid," a bit harshly. It was followed up with my determined words, "You are a commando!"

I knew what to do. I glanced up again and saw that my brothers – the ones I thought to be dead – were possessed by brain invaders. They had become zombies!

I pulled my blaster out and began to blast directly at their heads. Within moments, I was surrounded and my blaster was ripped from my hands. They took my blaster from me and I remembered that I'd stored a pocket knife in the back compartment of my belt. I swung my arm back and pulled it out, attempting to defend myself with it.

They were too strong for me.

They viciously grabbed me and removed my helmet. I was able to see them lift one of the worms up in the dim light. They placed it on the side of my face and it began to squirm around until it moved towards my mouth.

It entered and my immediate reaction was to bite down on it. That thought alone revolted me, but it was something I had to do. Survival mattered the most to me right now.

After I'd managed to kill the worm, the Geonosians began to torture me, biting me every now and then.

Geonosians and dead clones surrounded me.

I kicked the bugs off of me and pulled a grenade out of another compartment on my belt. I pulled the clip and threw it directly into the center of the group.

I blew the horrible creatures up along with myself and my brothers.
That's when I bolted into an upright position, my body sweating heavily as I breathed quickly. It had been a terrible nightmare…

I received a call from the Commander of my squad. He called me in for a mission with some of the commandos. I told him that I'd understood and I got up.

Once I saw the men, I felt like my days were numbered in this war.
I just prayed and hoped beyond hope that no one ever has this same nightmare.
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~SkyguysSkygirl May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
want you to know that you are amazing & you're my friend until my death. I f I don't get this back, I understand. But, I have a game for you, once you read this letter, you must send it to 15 people, including the person that sent it to you. If you receive at leaste 3 back, you are loved. Nobody knows how important something is until...................they lose it. Tonight, right at 12:00am, the person you like is going to realize that they love you! Then, something is going to happen to you between 1:00 & 2:00am. Be ready for the greatest shock of your life. If you break this chain, you, you are going to have bad luck with love for a whole year. Send this to 15 people and see what happens

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Anakin's Mrs. Skywalker.

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Because I WANT GALE!!

Currently on the Tardis with Anakin and The Doctor
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~SkyguysSkygirl Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sent an angel to watch over you last night, but it came back. I asked why: ... The angel said:"angels don't watch over angels!"
Twenty angels are IN your world. Ten of them are sleeping, nine are playing, One is reading this message. Send this to ten friends including me if I don't get it back then I guess I'm not one of them... as soon as you get five replies someone you love will quietly surprise you..

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Anakin's Mrs. Skywalker.

:heart:Team Peeta:heart:
Because I WANT GALE!!

Currently on the Tardis with Anakin and The Doctor
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heey I didn't know that you got it too ;)
(here Animationfreaky from youtube)

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Ha! Thought you might enjoy this.

Fun Star Wars Live Action Show News! [link]
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=mariokartexpert1 Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WE HAVE THE SAME BIRTHDAY. :happybounce:

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Happy Hunger Games, and may the odds be ever in your favor...(:
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"You could live a hundred lifetimes and still not deserve him, you know..."
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You're my kryptonite~ ♥
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hey its commandernick964 (aka therightrepublicstud)
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~SkyguysSkygirl Jun 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! I would make you a vid or something but can't till' next week. But I hope you have a good day! :D

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Anakin's Mrs. Skywalker.

:heart:Team Peeta:heart:
Because I WANT GALE!!

Currently on the Tardis with Anakin and The Doctor
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~SkyguysSkygirl Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HUG!
You have been hugged!
Spread the DA love around! (Copy and paste this message on their userpage!)

RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You -MUST- hug 6 other people, at least!
3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their user page!
4- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
5- You should most definitely get started hugging right away!
6- If you get hugged back you do not need to redo this

Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1.
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved!

1-3 you're a bad friend ~
4-6 you're an ok friend~
7-9 you're a good friend ~
10-& Up you're a great frie

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Anakin's Mrs. Skywalker.

:heart:Team Peeta:heart:
Because I WANT GALE!!

Currently on the Tardis with Anakin and The Doctor
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~BrazilianNut Jan 23, 2011  Student General Artist
Perdóname, veo que es nuevo aquí, y parece-me que no conoces muy bien las reglas de dA.

No puedes subir o usar imágenes de otras personas sin autorización de ellas: [link]

Esté en autos que infracción de los derechos de autor, también conocida como "robo de arte", puede suspenderte o mismo banir-te.

Gracias por tuya atención.

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Eu falo português
I speak English
Yo hablo español
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